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hi y'all. my brother recently wrote an essay on planes and the significance of the airfoil angle.

Profiling? So What? From a pilot's point of view...?


his teacher says this first sentence is awkward. Can you edit it for me to make it sound better?

Would a jet bomber ever be used on people using cardboard boxes as their only means of protection...?


Flight: What is one of mankind’s greatest achievements has had many changes, including cosmetic and internal modifications. It has transformed from the Wright brother’s plane at Kitty Hawk to today’s modern jet fighters and massive commercial airliners. These days, many engineers strive to increase the overall efficiency of planes in numerous ways, such as aerodynamics or.....................

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Problems with ATC and pilot communication?

OK- here goes:

Who invented the tail of the airplane?


Flight. While it is one of mankind’s greatest achievements, over the years it has endured many modifications, including cosmetic and internal. It's been transformed from the guise of the Wright brother’s "flying machine" at Kitty Hawk to the modern jet fighters and massive commercial airliners that we know today. These days, many engineers strive to increase the overall efficiency of planes in numerous ways, such as aerodynamics or.....................

explain the impact the wide body jet aircraft on the aviation industry with regard to passanger fares &travel.

Flight is one of man's greatest achievements. Through many modifications, including cosmetic and internal, it has transformed the Wright brother's aircraft at Kittyhawk into today's modern jet fighters and massive commercial airliners. With today's technology, many engineers are striving to increase the overall efficiency of planes in numerous ways, such as aerodynamics,.....

Can anyone pls.tell me the total length of wiring used in Airbus A380?

Flight, which is one of mankind's greatest achievements, has had many changes, including cosmetic and internal modifications etc....

What's the better demonstration team, the Blue Angels or the Red Arrows?


That's the only thing I would change.

Doesn't it seem odd that the Concorde SST is anachronistic?

Here's my take... of course, I ain't no college boy.

justify how would u handle a special handling situation in the absense of any information or proper doccuments


Flight: one of mankind’s greatest achievements. It has gone through significant changes during the past century, including major cosmetic, structural and internal modifications. It has been transformed from the Wright brother’s Flyer at Kitty Hawk to today’s modern jet fighters and massive commercial airliners. These days, many engineers strive to increase the overall efficiency of planes in numerous ways, such as aerodynamics or.....................

How do airplanes work? Or what is the history of the airplane?

Flight is one of mankind’s greatest achievements and has undergone many changes, including cosmetic and internal modifications. It was first achieved with the Wright brother’s plane at Kitty Hawk and is now manifested in various forms such as contemporary jet fighters and massive commercial airliners. Aerodynamic engineers strive to increase the overall efficiency of planes in numerous ways, such as aerodynamics or.....................

When a commercial or a privat pilot goes to an hotel as transit : Does he have breakfast,lunch and...for free?

Easy as 1, 2, 3.

why can't pilots have crown royal while flying?!?


1. Tell them what you're going to tell them.
2. Tell them.
3. Summarize what you told them.

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Flight is one of man's greatest achievements that has gone through cosmetic and internal changes.

airport list thingy?


The Wright brother's plane at Kitty Hawk has transformed into modern jet fighters and massive commerical airliners.

What is the cost of CPL MULTI IFR 225 Hrs in USA or Canada?


Today engineers strive to increase the efficiency of planes in ways such as aerodynamics, ease of flying, and of course comfort to the passengers.

How does reverse thrust work on a jet engine?


GOD bless you and your brother, always.
MBA-Boston University

could the National Aero-Space Plane (NASP) be built now?

Using the word "what" is the problem. It sounds like he wants to ask a question.

how do boeing company assemble airplanes?


He can write:

Will the Concorde fly again in the near future?


Flight, one of mankind's greatest achievements, has undergone many modifications, both internal and external.

What is a good company that will charter LARGE jets?

Flight:One of man's greatest achievements. Many changes have evolved the aircraft, including cosmetic and structural engineering. It has transformed from the Wright brother's original Kitty Hawk into today's modern jet fighters and massive commercial airliners. True to form, many engineers consistently increase the overall efficiency of aircraft with aerodynamics,...

Where can i buy an RC jet plane mainly a Concorde,A320-232, or a A380, and how much does it cost exactly?

take out the first what. Flight is one of....

Pilots only Question?

What is one of mankind's greatest achievements,"powered flight", has, over the years,completely transformed our society through its almost miraculous engineering developments.

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He can use this as the initial introductory statement, and follow up with the innovations that have occurred in the last 100 years. Don't go into too much detail, as it can bore an audience that does not share your love of aircraft. mention the "cantilever method" of construction, to the DC-2-3 airliners it was used on etc. (it did away with the need for wire bracing, for example) to the move from props to jets. Mention to the tremendous progress made in A/C design during WW1 and 2. Good Luck!!

why air plane left side doors are used for entering/exiting the air plane?

Flight: One of mankinds greatest acheivements has gone through many changes. From it's begainings with the Wright brothers simple functional plan at Kitty Hawk........................
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